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And What is the Audience Doing?

12 Tuesday Jan 2016

Posted by la Clarina in Scribbling, Theatre

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David Mamet, Jeffrey Hatcher, playwriting, R. Elliot Stout, The Art and Craft of Playwriting, theatre

jeffreyHatcherThis is from the author’s introduction to Jeffrey Hatcher‘s The Art & Craft of Playwriting:

Maybe you want your play to right a wrong or expiate a guilt or tickle a funny bone or change the world. Fine. But remember this question, one Dr. R. Elliott Stout, my theater professor at Denison University, had framed above his desk: “AND WHAT IS THE AUDIENCE DOING ALL THIS TIME?” David Mamet, who wrote such great plays as Glengarry Glen Ross and American Buffalo, once noted that the two hours an audience spends at the performance of a play is a lot to ask of a person’s life. Count the hours spent in the dark by even the most infrequent theatergoer and by the time he reaches eighty-three years of age, you’ll find he’d like a lot of those hours back. Our job in the theater is to make that octogenarian regret not one moment he’s spent in the dark.

Think of the times you’ve gone to the theater at the end of a long, tense, tiring day. You got the ticket for some godforsaken reason, and as the clock ticks toward eight, you want nothing more than to leave the theater and get home as soon as possible. You look at the program and are horrified to find the production has not one but two intermissions. You won’t be home until eleven or twelve. You look for the exit, but before you can make your move, the crowd grows silent, the lights go down, and you’re trapped in your row. You know in your bones it’s wrong to yell “fire.” And then it’s forty minutes later, the lights are up, the crowd is moving to the lobby, and all you can think about is how excited you are to find out what’s going to happen in the second act. You go back to your seat well before the curtain goes up again because you don’t want to miss a beat. Suddenly it’s the second intermission, and you don’t leave your seat this time because you’re actually talking about the play with the stranger next to you. Then the lights go down again, and before you know it the curtain call is over; the actors have left the stage, and you’re still applauding. You’re still sitting in your seat. You don’t want to leave the theater. And you’re trying to remember the last time a play made you feel that way.

That’s our job as playwrights. That’s what we do. We compel tired people, who have every reason to leave, to stay in their seats. And love staying. And come back for the next one.

Yes! Indeed. At times one can forget the people sitting in the dark – but in the end, it’s all about them. It’s a thought-provoking little shift of perspective, isn’t it? I think I want that question framed too…

Why do you read historical fiction?

17 Thursday Dec 2015

Posted by la Clarina in History, Scribbling, Stories

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Historical fiction, historical novel

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History Will Be Kind is out!

17 Tuesday Nov 2015

Posted by la Clarina in History, Scribbling, Stories

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A Little Princess, A Tale of Two Cities, Anthology, Charles Dickens, Historical fiction, History Will Be Kind, The Copperfield Review, Winston Churchill

History will be kind to me because I intend to write it,

Churchillsaid Winston Churchill… and write it he did. Authors of historical fiction usually go about “writing history” with more modest ambitions – or do they? Just look at Walter Scott or Charles Dickens… And I know Dickens was no historical novelist, properly speaking, but there is no denying that A Tale of Two Cities did much to shape the common perception of the French Revolution…

So perhaps this is it: we do not so much write history as tell it – and in telling it, we can shape the way it will be understood and perceived.

When Kipling said that if history were told in the form of stories it would never be forgotten, perhaps he did not mean that stories should take over the job of telling history. Perhaps he was stressing the responsibility that goes with the job of telling history in the form of stories… little_princess_fullpage

Just think of Sara Crewe telling dull Ermengarde about the French Revolution, and the severed head of the Princesse de Lamballe being carried over the crowd, stuck on a pike… “The princess was young and beautiful…” Sara tells a gaping Ermengarde – who won’t easily forget her history after that. A shame that Mme de Lamballe was 43 when she met her gruesome death – an age that no little girl would call “young”… So Ermengarde will always remember a picturesque fiction. It may not be very important, provided she remembers the French Revolution, but what of Dickens’s rather biased portrayal of the same period?

And yes – stories are not history, and vice versa. It would be most unfair to blame a novelist for “making things up” or “making things more dramatic”, but Ermengarde’s Princesse still raises interesting questions about the fiction and the perception of history.

Anhistory-kind-sml-2BWd History Will Be Kind, The Copperfield Review’s first anthology, provides an interesting exercise in “telling history”. A rich collection of historical short stories, poems and essays, it explores a range of historical periods, characters and events – from Empress Maud to Alexander the Great, from the Third Crusade to 1914 Mexico – and Kit Marlowe, of course. My own very young Kit Marlowe who, in Gentleman in Velvet, learns a hard lesson about consequences and prices to be paid.

On the whole, it is a little history of the world told through story, as well as an exploration of many ways in which “we” tell these stories…

You can find History Will Be Kind in e-book and paperback format here:

Amazon.com

Amazon.uk.co

Kobo

All else apart, and seeing the time of the year, wouldn’t it make a nice Christmas present for lovers of history and stories?

NaNoSomethingMo (and a small play thrown in)

03 Tuesday Nov 2015

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artificial deadline, Christmas plays, NaNoWriMo, road map, second draft, Translation

Noly-YN-DeadlineBecause I like an artificial deadline just as well as the next writer, I embarked on my own version of NaNoWriMo. More like NaNoReMo, because I intend to wrap up my second draft by the end of the month – and I know there is a thing called NaNoReMo, and it’s not in November, but never mind.

I embarked on it with the best of intentions and, one day in, I took it into my head to behead my novel. To cut the first three chapters, and start nearly two years later.

Oh, it does make sense – but I’m still reeling a little under the shock of the amputation… Besides, the first two days of November are holidays over here – meaning relatives and guests and family dinners, and graves to tend, and precious little time for writing…

Oh well, I told myself, I’m 2200 words behind, what with one thing and another – but never fear. I’m going to recover, starting tomorrow, ain’t I?

And right then the phone rings, and it is a local director asking do I have something small, and Christmassy – with children in it – something they can have ready by the middle of December?

And clearly I have maggots in my head, because instead of telling her that no, I’m sorry, and thank you for thinking of me – but no… what do I do? I hear myself say that why, yes – I have just the thing, only it’s in English, so I’ll need a few days to translate it…

I know, I know. I’m hopeless.

So last night I sat up very, very late, and translated like mad, and will do the same tonight, and try to follow my second-draft road map while sorting through the consequences of the beheading, and hope the local historian doesn’t turn up with his next chapter just now, and rehearse how to say “No. No. No, thank you. No. No. No. No…”

I’ll let you know.

The Good Rejection

29 Thursday Oct 2015

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good rejection, rejection, small publishers, writing

rejThey tell you there are rejections, and then there are rejections. They tell you that publishers, at first, just plain reject you, and then one day they start rejecting you but. And that’s a sign: you are about to make it.

Yes, well.

I won’t say it can’t happen, but let me tell you a small cautionary tale.

Back in the day, when I was young and naïve, I sent Out There a novel. Out There was a local small publisher, and the novel was a mammoth, 250k word historical – and the first volume in a trilogy…

You won’t be surprised to hear that the answer was “No, thanks”, but it was a qualified “No, thanks”. Why, the Small Publisher even had me over for a cup of coffee and a good chat. Remarkable novel, he said – just impossibly huge for such a small house… Why not try something shorter? Continue reading →

Speaking of writers

22 Thursday Oct 2015

Posted by la Clarina in Books, Scribbling

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Albert Camus, Joanne Harris, The Plague, The Stranger, the Writer's Manifesto

This is a mixed post, but there’s a method to my madness – so bear with me.

JoanneHarrisFirst things first, after my rant about the portrayal of historical novelists in fiction, my friend Davide Mana pointed me to the Writer’s Manifesto, by Joanne Harris. Harris may not be my favourite author, but I share many of her views on writing, writers, writerly life, readers, readerly expectations, and the many myths, misconceptions and downright bizarre ideas floating on this particular water.

Whether you are a writer or a reader, it makes for interesting, thought-provoking read.

And then there is Camus. AlbertCamus

I rather thought I loathed Albert Camus, you know. I read The Stranger and The Plague in French as a girl, and disliked both book intensely – after which it never crossed my mind to try Camus again. If asked, I’d say that Camus is not my kind of author – and that’s that.

Until last night, when we had our sea-themed Ad Alta Voce meeting, and my friend Milla read a descriptive piece about the sea – apparently some kind of highly stylized travel memoir. It was a short, thick thing, rich in images and heady in language – and wonderfully translated too… “What did you say is that?” I asked – and the entirely unexpected answer was: “Camus.” So now I’ll have to seek out the memoir, read it and, in all likelihood, revise my opinion of  Camus.

It’s one of the reasons why I love Ad Alta Voce: the findings, the discoveries, the surprises. After all, with writers, you never know.

How hard can it be?

20 Tuesday Oct 2015

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Domenico Seminerio, historical novel, José Covarrubias, José Saramago, Lost Years, William Shakespeare

JSI’ve read this novel about Shakespeare’s lost years and true identity… Yes, another one. This time Shakespeare is Shakespeare, but his mother is an Italian illegitimate noblewoman, daughter and grand-daughter to real remarkable figures of the Italian Renaissance, so this is where young Will was between 1585 and 1592: in Italy, taking the grand tour, and gallivanting from court to university and back again. The novel is split between two timelines: John Shakespeare’s love story and consequent fatherhood of the prodigious child, and two present day Italian historians stumbling across… you guess it: forgotten papers proving the Bard’s Italian and blue-blooded lineage.

It is not a very good book, I’m afraid – but this is not the point today. The fact is that, towards the end, the two historians tell each other that, despite all the documents they found, the world is not ready to have the Truth about Shakespeare revealed… So they decide to do what so many anti-stratfordians have done since Wilbur G. Zeigler’s days: write a historical novel. Continue reading →

History Will Be Kind

10 Saturday Oct 2015

Posted by la Clarina in History, Scribbling, Stories

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Anthology, Copperfield Press, Gentleman in Velvet, Historical fiction, Short story

Just to show you the gorgeous cover of History Will Be Kind, the first anthology by Copperfield Press.

history-kind-sml-2BWIsn’t it lovely? This is a black-and-white version to suit Scribblings, but click on the image to see the even more beautiful sepia-tinted original…

History Will Be Kind will be released on 17 November – and my story Gentleman in Velvet will be in it.

And a second draft

08 Thursday Oct 2015

Posted by la Clarina in Scribbling

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historical novel, second draft, writing

55327_girl-writing_lg-1There I was, sitting on my first draft, and on three months’ worth of notes – sticky or otherwise – and more than a little stuck with a sense of neither being ready nor knowing too well what to do next…

Well, actually, next I began by gathering all my notes and going through them with some consistency – because it seemed like a good idea – and this proved… interesting.

On the one hand, I put together a few reasoned lists of changes to be made – and this was good. On the other hand, perhaps it was a mistake to go back to the notes from very early days, when I was trying to sort out narrative modes… I found myself grappling with the same dilemmas again, and questioning just about every choice I’d made. It wasn’t exactly cheerful work… Continue reading →

More Old Word Music

01 Tuesday Sep 2015

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Annie Whitfield, English Authors of Historical Fiction, historical novel, Josephine Tey, Old English, To be a queen

Beowulf.firstpageWe’ve already talked about language and word choices when you are a historical novelist. Now I found another very interesting article on the subject: a post that Annie Whitfield wrote for English Authors of Historical Fiction, about her use of Old English in her novel To Be a Queen.

Ms. Whitfield seems to have taken a very rigorous approach – and of course there is always the matter of balancing authenticity with the necessity to write something that is not only readable, but also appealing and relatable…  Continue reading →

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